Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

My first attempt at a story, hope you enjoy it!

CHARACTERS (the Fearsome Foursome):

  • Joey Stevens, Male, 13. Tall, thin, outgoing, and fun.
  • Sam Johnson, Male, 12. Average sized, very funny, and athletic.
  • Lisa Taylor, Female, 13. Slightly taller than average, comical, very outgoing.
  • Chrissy Carter, Female, 12. Very small for her age, very smart, somewhat quiet compared to her friends.

May 30, 2000

The shrieking of the alarm clock pierced through Joey’s dream, sending the images of him relaxing in a hot tub into a haze. He smacked his side table a few times before finally landing on the snooze button and promptly fell back asleep. Nine minutes later, the piercing sound awoke him again, this time a bit more effectively. Groggily, Joey sat up and rubbed his eyes. He felt very sweaty and uncomfortable, just completely drenched with sweat. He kicked the blankets off of himself and was shocked at what he saw. He wasn’t sweaty, he had wet the bed! Unsure of what to do, his eyes began to well up with tears.

“MOM!”

Maggie Stevens heard her sun yelling from down the hall. She wondered what he could need; he usually doesn’t make his presence known until after a long shower in the mornings. She shrugged and made her way to his room. She was surprised to find her almost 13 year old son crying and sitting in a wet bed.

“Joey, what happened?” Maggie asked with concern.

“I…I peed in my sleep.” Joey said between sniffs.

“Ssshhh, it’s ok sweetie, it’s just an accident. Why don’t you go get a shower and leave your pajamas here and I’ll get all of this washed, ok?”

Joey nodded. His mom brushed away his tears, gave him a kiss on the forehead, and left the room to give him some privacy. Joey climbed out of bed, seeing for the first time the huge wet spot on it. He took off his wet shirt, pants, and boxer shorts and left them on the bed. As he went to get his towel he looked in the full-length mirror on his closet door. Joey looked at his naked reflection, noting how his shoulders were broadening, he was taller, and there was a sparse growth of hair coming in above his penis. He wondered why, is he is becoming a man, why would he wet the bed like a baby?


When Joey got home from school that day, everything in his room was back to normal. It smelled fresh and there were new sheets on the bed. Joey sat at his computer and signed on to AIM. He and his friends, the Fearsome Foursome as his mom referred to them, had to plan their next birthday party. Joey and Lisa both turned 13 on May 5th and had a sleepover to celebrate. Chrissy and Sam, who also shared a birthday, would be 13 on June 13th, right after school let out. Each year, the big sleepover to celebrate their birthday was the official kick off to summer.

The sleepovers were always held at Joey’s house. While all of the friends’ families were pretty well off, Joey’s house had the most land. His mom is a lawyer for Disney and his dad worked as a sous chef at one of the theme park restaurants. This enabled them to not only have a large house, but a pool out back complete with a pool house. Feeling that a pool house was a bit unnecessary, they long ago had converted it into Joey’s playhouse. This made it the perfect spot for the summer sleepovers that the Fearsome Foursome looked forward to throughout the school year.


Three doors down from the Stevens’ residence Joey’s friend Sam signed off of AIM. He turned around in his chair to face his nine-year-old cousin Jake, who was staying for the week after Memorial Day, as his school was already done for the year.

“Playstation?” Sam asked.

“Heck yeah!” came Jake’s reply. The two boys were about five minutes into the game when Sam’s mother interrupted.

“Hey boys, I’m going to need you guys to get ready for bed now.”

“Aww mom, why?”

“Your father and I have that dinner tonight. We’re ordering you a pizza for dinner and I’d much rather know you’re ready before I leave. Mrs. Stevens is going to come by and make sure you’re in bed by nine. Tomorrow’s a school day.”

“But why do we need to get ready for bed now?” Sam inquired.

“Samuel.” That was all it took. She left the room. Sam took off his school shirt and pants and pulled on a tee shirt and basketball shorts. He looked over at Jake, who was still sitting on the floor, shutting down the Playstation.

“I don’t know why we have to do this now, it’s kinda weird…” Sam began. He was cut off by a knock on the door and his mother’s reappearance.

“Sam, go to my room, Dad’s going to try and teach you to tie a tie,” she commanded. Sam obeyed and as he walked down the hall, wondered why his mom was acting so strangely.


Across the street from Joey and Sam’s houses, Chrissy was over at Lisa’s house. Her parents were next door, preparing for the same dinner as Sam’s parents. They opted to have Chrissy stay the night with Lisa, a rare school night sleepover that had the girls very excited. They finished an early dinner and went up to Lisa’s room to watch a movie before bed.

“What movie are we going to watch?” Chrissy asked.

“Scream!” came Lisa’s response.

“I knew I shouldn’t have gotten that for your birthday.” Chrissy rolled her eyes.

“You promised you would watch it with me!” Lisa pleaded.

“Oh, fine.”

A knock on the door interrupted the girls chatter and Lisa’s mom entered with a big bowl of popcorn and two tall glasses of Kool-Aid.

“Thanks mom!” Lisa chirped.

“Yeah, thanks Mrs. Taylor,” added Chrissy.

“No problem girls. Listen, I want you two to get ready for bed now. Last time Lisa watched this movie she was too afraid to get out of bed to brush her teeth and get into her PJs.”

“Mom!” Lisa yelled as Chrissy laughed.

Mrs. Taylor left the room and the girls got ready. Chrissy dug around in her bag and picked out a long tee shirt with the Spice Girls on the front. Lisa went through her dresser and pulled out a Hello Kitty nightgown. Chrissy laughed.

“Hello Kitty, really?”

“I could say the same for you, Smarty Spice.”

The girls laughed. Chrissy was about to leave the room when Lisa kicked off her pants. She figured it was just like gym class, and followed suit, discarding her school shirt and pants, leaving her in her panties. Lisa pulled her shirt over her head and Chrissy gasped.

“When did you start wearing a bra?!” Chrissy asked.

“After I turned 13 my mom got me some.” Lisa replied as she removed it and let it drop to the floor. Chrissy could pass for a little kid, standing at about four and a half feet with long, brown hair that was usually pulled into a ponytail, and completely flat-chested. Lisa, on the other hand, was blonde, slightly over five feet tall, and had started developing. Chrissy couldn’t help but feel a little jealous. Looking back at her friend, Chrissy began laughing again. Lisa, standing before Chrissy in her Scooby-Doo panties, put her hands on her hips in mock anger.

“Don’t diss my Scoobies.” The girls cracked up as they finished getting ready for bed. Lisa popped in the movie and the girls plopped down on the floor with the popcorn and their drinks.


Sam and Jake had finished their pizza and were each downing their third Coke. Austin Powers had ended and was now rewinding. Sam, always the jokester, began strutting around the room, mimicking the title character. Jake was on his back on the floor, laughing hysterically. Sam ended his routine with the little dance and jump the International Man of Mystery was known for, and Jake’s laughter doubled. Sam began laughing too until, very suddenly, Jake stopped. He sat up straight and his eyes widened in horror. Sam stopped laughing and was about to ask what was wrong when he heard the sound.

The sound sounded almost machine-like, steadily continuing as a soft whirr. Sam glanced down and realized where the sound was coming from. Then he realized what it was. He made Jake laugh so hard that he was wetting himself. But Sam didn’t see a wet spot.

“Uh, Jake, are you ok?” Sam asked. Jake didn’t respond, just hung his head shamefully as the sound faded out. There was an awkward silence.

“Jake?”

“Yeah?” Jake responded quietly. Sam was relieved to get a response.

“What’s wrong?”

“I…I, uh…” Jake sighed with frustration.

“Did you, um, have an accident?” Sam asked cautiously. Jake nodded. Sam stood and turned away from his cousin as he felt a tingling feeling between his legs. “Uh, no worries. Here, let me get you different clothes.”

Jake reached out to stop Sam, but he was too late. Sam opened Jake’s suitcase and his eyes widened with shock. Immediately his penis sprung to life. Inside of the suitcase was a package of pull up diapers called Goodnites.

“I wet the bed,” Jake said woefully.

Sam jumped and did his best to cover up his erection. He didn’t hear Jake come up behind him. Sam looked at his younger cousin, who seemed to be waiting for whatever jokes were coming.

“Oh. Um, well, no worries Jake. Plenty of kids wet the bed.” Sam surprised Jake with his cool response. “So, you uh, you wear these?”

“Yeah.”

“And that’s why we had to get ready for bed so early?”

“Yeah.”

“So you’re wearing one now?”

“Yeah.”

Sam took a deep breath. “Can I see it?”

Jake shrugged and pulled down his dry PJ pants to reveal a wet Goodnite.

Later that night, long after Sam watched Jake change into a clean diaper and he fell asleep, Sam laid awake in bed thinking about it. Why did diapers get him so excited?


In Lisa’s room, the lights were out. The music in the film ominously warned of impending doom as Sidney crept through the house. Suddenly, the ghost-faced killer sprung into the frame and the girls screamed with terror. Lisa began laughing at herself for getting frightened yet again by this scene. She stopped laughing when she realized Chrissy wasn’t laughing. Chrissy was crying.

“What’s wrong, Chrissy, it’s just a movie.” Lisa said. Chrissy didn’t respond, just kept crying. Lisa stopped the movie and turned on the light. She looked at Chrissy, who was still sitting cross-legged on the floor. Lisa saw a small puddle between her friend’s legs and a wet spot on her panties.

“Oh Lisa, ssshhh, it’s ok, it’s ok,” Lisa consoled.

“No it’s not Lisa,” sobbed Chrissy, “I peed my pants!”

“Oh no, sweetie, you aren’t wearing pants. You peed in your panties.” Lisa joked, and even Chrissy laughed a little.

“This is so embarrassing,” Chrissy said.

“Oh please, get me laughing hard enough and I’ll pee everywhere, it’s no biggie,” Lisa responded. “Here, let me get you something to clean up with and some clothes.”

Lisa went into her bathroom and got a container of wipes from under the sink. She returned to the bedroom and handed them to Chrissy. Chrissy took off her wet things and began wiping herself clean. Chrissy looked up at Lisa and caught her staring. Both girls blushed.

“Sorry, usually I’m the only naked person in here.” Again Lisa’s joke brought on giggles and eased the situation. “Now, do you want Minnie Mouse panties and the Disney nightgown or the Supergirl panties and tank top?”

Chrissy laughed at her friend’s childish selection of sleepwear and choose the Disney option. The girls set their alarms, and climbed into bed.

Back across the street, Joey was already asleep. He was dreaming about catching a huge wave on his surfboard and plunging deep into the ocean. As he dreamed, a wet spot grew larger and larger on his bed.

Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

Excellent start, I have to say. I wasn’t sure what to expect at first but I was definitely pleasantly surprised. Cute, a little over the top (all having the same birthday, two friends just randomly having an accident on the same night), but not enough that it makes the story seem unrealistic though people may complain about that. This actually really reminds me of something I would write.

I think you have some room to improve, but it’s a very solid start and I can’t wait to see where this keeps going.

Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

I think this is a promising start, I too am confused as to who is sleeping at who’s house. I am excited to see where this goes.

Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

If I’m not mistaken…here’s the situation. Four friends, Joey, Sam, Lisa and Chrissy plan on having a big end of the school year sleepover party.
This chapter takes place before hand. Joey has just wet the bed, he did not have a sleepover with anyone. Sam’s little cousin is sleeping over, and he is a bedwetter and Sam finds out and is cool with him (he actually finds wearing goodnites very intriguing), and Lisa and Chrissy are having there own girls only sleepover, in which Chrissy wets her pants while watching a scary movie.

I could see how it would be a little confusing, but I think I understood it pretty easily. A lot of characters introduced in a short period of time, a similar problem that I used to have.

Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

amazing start… please post another one soon!! it was really good!

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Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

Well it could be interesting.

-Lizzy

Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

I think there’s something a little ‘off’ about it, actually.

Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

If I’m not mistaken…here’s the situation. Four friends, Joey, Sam, Lisa and Chrissy plan on having a big end of the school year sleepover party.
This chapter takes place before hand. Joey has just wet the bed, he did not have a sleepover with anyone. Sam’s little cousin is sleeping over, and he is a bedwetter and Sam finds out and is cool with him (he actually finds wearing goodnites very intriguing), and Lisa and Chrissy are having there own girls only sleepover, in which Chrissy wets her pants while watching a scary movie.

Couldn’t have explained it any better myself (clearly). Sorry for all of the confusion. This chapter is mainly an introduction.

For other comments:

  • The story was written in one sitting the day it was posted.
  • The setting is suburban Orlando, Summer of 2000, hence the dated references.
  • It should seem over the top or unrealistic at times, it's almost 100% fantasy. There have been (and will be) events and characters based on real life, but for the most part it's fiction.

Re: Hot Fun in the Summertime, Chapter 1.

wait, i dont get it, does that mean u have more chapters or is that it?