Tears from Heaven

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Good story is all i can say.

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Can’t say I didn’t halfway expect the ending, but it still hit me like a punch in the gut. Exceptionally well-told, with a keen eye for description. Bravissimo!

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Simply beautiful. It’s not often I see a short story (or anything) pull off this kind of ending.

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While it’s a little dark for my tastes, this is a very good short story, and it stands well on it’s own. Writing short stories that focus on the scene and emotions instead of plot is difficult to do well, I think, but this manages to do it.

You also surprised me at the end - I didn’t see that coming at all.

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Beautiful story. The title did clue me I. On the ending, but it didn’t ruin it. It still sent shivers up my nerves. I connected on the whole story, actually. Very well done, Astra.